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Krss
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:smile: :smile: :smile:

Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 11:04 pm on Oct. 5, 2006 | Link to this post
Marion
forebrain



OMG TOMATO JUICE. XDDD that was a delicious (no pun intended) reference.

For a wonderful wonderful moment I thought Marion had been poisoned! Darn it. =P

Total Posts: 624 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 2:38 am on Oct. 6, 2006 | Link to this post
Almirena
Brain-Tingler



I love the interaction between Gijs and Krss, and Gijs's indignant cry of "He's NOT my lover!" Tsola's deliberate aloofness in observing the others is sure not to last long - I have a feeling she'll be drawn into the events rather than able to observe from a distance. Marion's self-obsession is wonderfully written - it's so beautifully different to her rf character (rf = real forum).

Santi and his "I'm a doctor" and his subtle sense of power is beautifully done!

r is such a great foil for the Almirena! Their repartée had me giggling - both obnoxious in different ways!

In short - keep it coming, Krss. But hey, can't we ALL have red corsets?

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Half-light, purblind streams where moonlight washes over trees / Lustred with a glow, as if from pearls upon the throat
Where the night's kiss lights upon her; rose's rhapsodies, / Warm as oils, imbue this bliss-fed hour with trembling note
"Where-? And who-?" Her breath's unspoken soul is light's perdue
That, hidden, seeks the unseen with a sigh… "Ah, L'inconnu!"

Total Posts: 1033 | Joined Sep. 2006 | Posted on: 3:11 am on Oct. 6, 2006 | Link to this post
Gijs
Krss fodder



Quote: from Krss on 12:57 am on Oct. 6, 2006
Clarifications:

1. The Gijs character is overage.
2. The real Krss is not a paedophile.:tongue:
3. Krss/Gijs is a plot point, not wish-fulfillment.
4. Santi/Gijs, however, is.:tongue:


You're not fooling me.
I kicked you. :lol:

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:gkrules:

Total Posts: 949 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 6:11 am on Oct. 6, 2006 | Link to this post
Tsolaelia
White Matter



:laugh: There's definitely an element of me in Tsolaelia's character.. particularly the nervous juice-spilling bit. And I have sedatives! :bounce: Santi's character is very sexy, and Marion reminds me a little of Lady Howard from GK3, hehe.

For a wonderful wonderful moment I thought Marion had been poisoned! Darn it. =P

I thought the same! Alas!

Total Posts: 460 | Joined Sep. 2006 | Posted on: 10:50 am on Oct. 6, 2006 | Link to this post
Krss
admin



Thank you so much for your wonderful comments. :smile:


OMG TOMATO JUICE. XDDD that was a delicious (no pun intended) reference.
For a wonderful wonderful moment I thought Marion had been poisoned! Darn it. =P

Glad you liked the tomato juice. Well, except "you" kinda didn't.:tongue:
Poisoned? So quickly?


I love the interaction between Gijs and Krss, and Gijs's indignant cry of "He's NOT my lover!"

:evillaugh: @ denial. I'm glad you like the interaction between them.

Tsola's deliberate aloofness in observing the others is sure not to last long - I have a feeling she'll be drawn into the events rather than able to observe from a distance.

You'd be accurate. :smile:

Marion's self-obsession is wonderfully written - it's so beautifully different to her rf character (rf = real forum).

:smile:!

Santi and his "I'm a doctor" and his subtle sense of power is beautifully done!

Hehe, thanks. :smile:

r is such a great foil for the Almirena! Their repartée had me giggling - both obnoxious in different ways!

They are a match for each other.:tongue:

In short - keep it coming, Krss. But hey, can't we ALL have red corsets?

I will! And you have a red dress.. it's almost like a corset, only not.:tongue:


You're not fooling me.

Oh yes, I am.

I kicked you.

You would appreciate that part.:tongue:


There's definitely an element of me in Tsolaelia's character.. particularly the nervous juice-spilling bit. And I have sedatives! :bounce:

I thought she was related to you, even if not completely like you.

Santi's character is very sexy,

Yep. :smile:

and Marion reminds me a little of Lady Howard from GK3, hehe.

Haha, never crossed my mind, until now.

I thought the same! Alas!

We've just begun! We don't even have the whole cast yet!:tongue:

Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 2:14 pm on Oct. 6, 2006 | Link to this post
Gijs
Krss fodder



All guests have arrived.
Let the diner start.

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:gkrules:

Total Posts: 949 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 3:23 pm on Oct. 6, 2006 | Link to this post
Krss
admin



:smile:

Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 3:31 pm on Oct. 6, 2006 | Link to this post
r
flatliner



the last three parts i've just finished reading (was offline for over a day) are really good!! it actually reads like a real novel.. O_o

Quote: from Almirena on 3:11 am on Oct. 6, 2006
But hey, can't we ALL have red corsets?

i think i'll pass, thank you..

Total Posts: 491 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 3:57 pm on Oct. 6, 2006 | Link to this post
Krss
admin



the last three parts i've just finished reading (was offline for over a day) are really good!! it actually reads like a real novel.. O_o

:yay: Thank you, it's such high praise! :smile:

i think i'll pass, thank you..

:lol:!! Don't give me ideas.

Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 4:00 pm on Oct. 6, 2006 | Link to this post
Almirena
Brain-Tingler



Krss, the minute you stop having ideas, the world will have ended.

Now I'm smiling widely over the way you wrote Nico into the story. Rushing madly to get there, nearly late, obsessive about being there - now why do I find that so ironic? *grin* I particularly enjoyed Nico's dropping of the keys and his paranoid delusions about the taxi driver and the other guests.

But wait! It may not BE a delusion. It could all be real.

The tension's killing me...

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Half-light, purblind streams where moonlight washes over trees / Lustred with a glow, as if from pearls upon the throat
Where the night's kiss lights upon her; rose's rhapsodies, / Warm as oils, imbue this bliss-fed hour with trembling note
"Where-? And who-?" Her breath's unspoken soul is light's perdue
That, hidden, seeks the unseen with a sigh… "Ah, L'inconnu!"

Total Posts: 1033 | Joined Sep. 2006 | Posted on: 4:04 pm on Oct. 6, 2006 | Link to this post
Krss
admin



Krss, the minute you stop having ideas, the world will have ended.

:lol:!! Okay, here's an idea. How about Santi and Gijs together?
Wait, I am the writer.. :evillaugh:

Now I'm smiling widely over the way you wrote Nico into the story. Rushing madly to get there, nearly late, obsessive about being there - now why do I find that so ironic? *grin* I particularly enjoyed Nico's dropping of the keys and his paranoid delusions about the taxi driver and the other guests.

The irony of him wanting to get there, considering this is a murder mystery story, is not escaping anyone, I'm sure. :bg: Nico is paranoid, all right.:tongue:

But wait! It may not BE a delusion. It could all be real.

Or that. :wink:

The tension's killing me...

Don't die yet! There is still a looong way to go.:tongue:

Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 4:07 pm on Oct. 6, 2006 | Link to this post
gabnic
core labourer



But hey, can't we ALL have red corsets?

I'll probably end up in one by the end of the weekend. :blink:

Now I think that the dining room, and the entire house in fact is too crowded.   :plotting: :evillaugh:

Total Posts: 61 | Joined Sep. 2006 | Posted on: 4:37 pm on Oct. 6, 2006 | Link to this post
Krss
admin



I'll probably end up in one by the end of the weekend. :blink:

Considering you're gay, I wouldn't discount that.

Or did you mean in real life? :evillaugh:

Now I think that the dining room, and the entire house in fact is too crowded.   :plotting: :evillaugh:

You know, I have the same impression.:tongue:

Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 4:40 pm on Oct. 6, 2006 | Link to this post
r
flatliner



Quote: from gabnic on 4:37 pm on Oct. 6, 2006

I'll probably end up in one by the end of the weekend.

loool!! :))))

Total Posts: 491 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 5:11 pm on Oct. 6, 2006 | Link to this post
Marion
forebrain



I love the latest Nico part. I find the paranoid character terribly interesting for some reason! Hehe.

Total Posts: 624 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 11:48 pm on Oct. 6, 2006 | Link to this post
Krss
admin



I'm glad you do. :smile: But I think once Nico reads this I'll get fired.:tongue:

Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 11:49 pm on Oct. 6, 2006 | Link to this post
Santi
Phantom moderator



Nice flow, the events are beginning to happen.
I like the variety of personalities you managed to insert, as well as the overall athmosphere.

I feel like Jack from Lost!:biggrin:

Keep it coming...

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"Ich werde sie sehen!" ruf' ich morgens aus, wenn ich mich ermuntere und mit aller Heiterkeit der schönen Sonne entgegenblicke; "ich werde sie sehen!" und da habe ich für den ganzen Tag keinen Wunsch weiter. Alles, alles verschlingt sich in dieser Aussicht. [Goethe]

Total Posts: 1703 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 12:01 am on Oct. 7, 2006 | Link to this post
Krss
admin



:smile:

Nice flow, the events are beginning to happen.

Thank you.. Yes, they are. :smile: Still just beginning, though.

I like the variety of personalities you managed to insert, as well as the overall athmosphere.

:smile: again. I tried to make them completely different from each other and rather extreme, but still human.

I feel like Jack from Lost!:biggrin:

I haven't watched Lost, except for the first episode, but Jack is a doctor, right?

Keep it coming...

Now I have a new impulse to. :smile:

Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 12:04 am on Oct. 7, 2006 | Link to this post
Santi
Phantom moderator



I feel like Jack from Lost!:biggrin:

I haven't watched Lost, except for the first episode, but Jack is a doctor, right?

He is. :nod:

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"Ich werde sie sehen!" ruf' ich morgens aus, wenn ich mich ermuntere und mit aller Heiterkeit der schönen Sonne entgegenblicke; "ich werde sie sehen!" und da habe ich für den ganzen Tag keinen Wunsch weiter. Alles, alles verschlingt sich in dieser Aussicht. [Goethe]

Total Posts: 1703 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 12:10 am on Oct. 7, 2006 | Link to this post
 

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