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All of them looked at Krss, whose eyes became almost as large as Gijs’.
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Almirena
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With Marion heading off alone to the toilet, where she plans to set up camp, there can only be trouble ahead, particularly since the main party cannot find any matches.
Chilling.
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Half-light, purblind streams where moonlight washes over trees / Lustred with a glow, as if from pearls upon the throat
Where the night's kiss lights upon her; rose's rhapsodies, / Warm as oils, imbue this bliss-fed hour with trembling note
"Where-? And who-?" Her breath's unspoken soul is light's perdue
That, hidden, seeks the unseen with a sigh… "Ah, L'inconnu!"
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Krss
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Hehe. 
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Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 9:53 pm on Oct. 15, 2006 | Link to this post
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Almirena
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WHACK!
Poor Gijs. His girly moment with Santi is over, and so is his life, I presume.
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Half-light, purblind streams where moonlight washes over trees / Lustred with a glow, as if from pearls upon the throat
Where the night's kiss lights upon her; rose's rhapsodies, / Warm as oils, imbue this bliss-fed hour with trembling note
"Where-? And who-?" Her breath's unspoken soul is light's perdue
That, hidden, seeks the unseen with a sigh… "Ah, L'inconnu!"
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Total Posts: 1033 | Joined Sep. 2006 | Posted on: 10:09 pm on Oct. 15, 2006 | Link to this post
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Krss
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!!
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Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 10:10 pm on Oct. 15, 2006 | Link to this post
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very well written death scenes.. very Agatha Krsstie.. :p
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Total Posts: 491 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 10:11 pm on Oct. 15, 2006 | Link to this post
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LOL! *beams*
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Krss
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21,005 words.
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Marion
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It'll be a real pity if this isn't published somewhere else other than this forum 
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Marion
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=P Now we just have to see if the real Marion does indeed have "Silent Hill-esque tendencies".
edit: nice turn of phrase there Tsolaelia. 
(Edited by Marion at 3:29 am on Oct. 16, 2006)
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Krss
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Indeed.
I apologize for leaving you guys with that chapter.. but I had to get it out tonight, and I'm too tired to write more. But I'll just say that it gets (relatively) lighter from now on, at least for a while.
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Almirena
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Alas, poor Bearic! I knew him well!
The tension continues as we wonder... is it a real ghost? Or is it someone who's bound and determined to kill off his/her fellow human beings?
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Half-light, purblind streams where moonlight washes over trees / Lustred with a glow, as if from pearls upon the throat
Where the night's kiss lights upon her; rose's rhapsodies, / Warm as oils, imbue this bliss-fed hour with trembling note
"Where-? And who-?" Her breath's unspoken soul is light's perdue
That, hidden, seeks the unseen with a sigh… "Ah, L'inconnu!"
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Almirena
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No! I refuse to go on wondering! I'm going to stop reading TLF right now. *struggles to go cold turkey*
I... can't... do... it...
I'd better just get along to TLF-Readers Anonymous right now and face up to it. "Hello. My name is Almirena and I am a TLFaholic."
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Half-light, purblind streams where moonlight washes over trees / Lustred with a glow, as if from pearls upon the throat
Where the night's kiss lights upon her; rose's rhapsodies, / Warm as oils, imbue this bliss-fed hour with trembling note
"Where-? And who-?" Her breath's unspoken soul is light's perdue
That, hidden, seeks the unseen with a sigh… "Ah, L'inconnu!"
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Total Posts: 1033 | Joined Sep. 2006 | Posted on: 4:38 am on Oct. 16, 2006 | Link to this post
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Krss
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That's such a nice compliment. And a funny one.
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Gijs
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What the others said. And I totally agree with Tsolaelia.
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Krss
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Can't you come up with a personal comment??
Thanks anyway.
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