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Krss
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Yay, thank you. :smile: This is very nice of you guys. I'll have to put a lot of effort to make it turn out well. :smile:

Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 8:42 pm on Oct. 12, 2006 | Link to this post
Krss
admin



Here are some personal thoughts.. comments, what have you. :smile: I'm going all sentimental on your arses.:tongue:

I'm glad I did all the planning when they were just names and not characters. Otherwise right now I'd just make this into a happy ending with a decahedron-- a general orgy of the guests plus the snake, with the members of the household watching.:tongue: Seriously, it'll be hard to write this from now on. I've grown attached to all the chars.

Otherwise.. I'm having fun with this. It's the best fun I've ever had writing. I managed to mix in this layers of reality with elements from Gray Matter, GK 1, 2 and 3, Ten Little Indians, Clue, It, any bad horror movie and my twisted mind, and I love baking the whole cake.

And you guys reading it, enjoying it and giving me live feedback, helping me improve.. this is an amazing experience. Thank you for it. :smile: I'd like to say that I won't cheat you, and I'll try to explain everything puzzling before the story is over.

We've gone a bit past its half. There's still a lot to come. It's already at almost 16,000 words.. :smile:

Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 9:42 pm on Oct. 12, 2006 | Link to this post
Marion
forebrain



You're welcome, and we want more. *pokes*

Total Posts: 624 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 10:15 pm on Oct. 12, 2006 | Link to this post
Krss
admin



I'm writing as we speak.:tongue:

Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 10:24 pm on Oct. 12, 2006 | Link to this post
Almirena
Brain-Tingler



Gijs's reaction iis written very believably, and Santi's own acknowledgement of why he enlightened Gijs is a nice touch.

But... you know... is there anyone sexually NORMAL in that house? (I suspect the maid is in love with her duster, and Walker is wooing the front door knob.)

_____

I'm glad you're getting a kick out of writing this, Krss - we're certainly getting a kick out of reading it.

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Half-light, purblind streams where moonlight washes over trees / Lustred with a glow, as if from pearls upon the throat
Where the night's kiss lights upon her; rose's rhapsodies, / Warm as oils, imbue this bliss-fed hour with trembling note
"Where-? And who-?" Her breath's unspoken soul is light's perdue
That, hidden, seeks the unseen with a sigh… "Ah, L'inconnu!"

Total Posts: 1033 | Joined Sep. 2006 | Posted on: 11:24 pm on Oct. 12, 2006 | Link to this post
Bearic
Fear the banana! That or get me icecream. =]



Quote: from Almirena on 7:24 pm on Oct. 12, 2006
Gijs's reaction iis written very believably, and Santi's own acknowledgement of why he enlightened Gijs is a nice touch.

But... you know... is there anyone sexually NORMAL in that house? (I suspect the maid is in love with her duster, and Walker is wooing the front door knob.)

_____

I'm glad you're getting a kick out of writing this, Krss - we're certainly getting a kick out of reading it.


I think Bearic is normal. Or at least for now.

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"Rectitude carried to excess harden into stiffness; benevolence indulged beyond measure sinks into weakness."

Total Posts: 523 | Joined Sep. 2006 | Posted on: 11:30 pm on Oct. 12, 2006 | Link to this post
Krss
admin



Gijs's reaction iis written very believably, and Santi's own acknowledgement of why he enlightened Gijs is a nice touch.

I'm glad you think so. :smile:

But... you know... is there anyone sexually NORMAL in that house? (I suspect the maid is in love with her duster, and Walker is wooing the front door knob.)

:lol:!! Okay, let's see. Heteros: r, Almirena, Marion, Bearic, Tsolaelia and Nico. More than half.:biggrin:

I'm glad you're getting a kick out of writing this, Krss - we're certainly getting a kick out of reading it.

Thank you so much. :smile:

I think Bearic is normal. Or at least for now.

You see??:tongue:

Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 11:50 pm on Oct. 12, 2006 | Link to this post
Bearic
Fear the banana! That or get me icecream. =]



I think I may know who the killer is. Not quite sure yet though.

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"Rectitude carried to excess harden into stiffness; benevolence indulged beyond measure sinks into weakness."

Total Posts: 523 | Joined Sep. 2006 | Posted on: 12:57 am on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
Krss
admin



When you think you're sure, PM the name to me and I'll give you credit at the end if you're right. :smile:

Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 12:58 am on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
Marion
forebrain



Ohh, now this is interesting. Nobody died till he said somebody will die. Bwahaha.

Total Posts: 624 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 1:56 am on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
Krss
admin



Hehe. :smile:

Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 1:57 am on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
Almirena
Brain-Tingler



Grippingly written! Heart-palpitatingly suspenseful!

... And the two words Marion couldn't hear over her screams were... "One down"...? *wicked grin*



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Half-light, purblind streams where moonlight washes over trees / Lustred with a glow, as if from pearls upon the throat
Where the night's kiss lights upon her; rose's rhapsodies, / Warm as oils, imbue this bliss-fed hour with trembling note
"Where-? And who-?" Her breath's unspoken soul is light's perdue
That, hidden, seeks the unseen with a sigh… "Ah, L'inconnu!"

Total Posts: 1033 | Joined Sep. 2006 | Posted on: 2:12 am on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
Krss
admin



Thank you very much. :smile:

And :lol: probably!

Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 2:13 am on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
Tsolaelia
White Matter



Eee, I love this. :smile: Poor Nico.

Heteros: r, Almirena, Marion, Bearic, Tsolaelia and Nico.

..not Gijs? :erm:

Total Posts: 460 | Joined Sep. 2006 | Posted on: 4:04 am on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
Krss
admin



Gijs is confused.:tongue:

Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 4:45 am on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
Tsolaelia
White Matter



Quote: from Krss on 2:45 pm on Oct. 13, 2006
Gijs is confused.:tongue:


Why do I foresee a gabnic/Santi/Gijs/snake foursome?:tongue:

And of course, I'd be willing to play any parts you need me to for the trailer; perhaps Almirena could help with extra roles, too. Krss should play Krss, though!

Total Posts: 460 | Joined Sep. 2006 | Posted on: 5:28 am on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
Gijs
Krss fodder



No! Not Nico! :sad:  

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:gkrules:

Total Posts: 949 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 6:06 am on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
Krss
admin



Why do I foresee a gabnic/Santi/Gijs/snake foursome?:tongue:

You forgot Krss! How could you forget Krss?? :bash: It's a pentagram!

And of course, I'd be willing to play any parts you need me to for the trailer;

Thank you.:biggrin:

perhaps Almirena could help with extra roles, too.

That would be lovely if she could.

Krss should play Krss, though!

She will, although she will sound very bland compared to the others.:tongue:

Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 4:47 pm on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
Krss
admin



Quote: from Gijs on 1:06 am on Oct. 13, 2006
No! Not Nico! :sad:  


I'm afraid so.. but I think you'd better start worrying about Gijs.:tongue:

Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 4:49 pm on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
Gijs
Krss fodder



Who will survive and what will be left of them.


(from what was that? the thing?)

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:gkrules:

Total Posts: 949 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 6:45 pm on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
 

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