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Yay, thank you.  This is very nice of you guys. I'll have to put a lot of effort to make it turn out well.
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Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 8:42 pm on Oct. 12, 2006 | Link to this post
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Krss
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Here are some personal thoughts.. comments, what have you. I'm going all sentimental on your arses.
I'm glad I did all the planning when they were just names and not characters. Otherwise right now I'd just make this into a happy ending with a decahedron-- a general orgy of the guests plus the snake, with the members of the household watching. Seriously, it'll be hard to write this from now on. I've grown attached to all the chars.
Otherwise.. I'm having fun with this. It's the best fun I've ever had writing. I managed to mix in this layers of reality with elements from Gray Matter, GK 1, 2 and 3, Ten Little Indians, Clue, It, any bad horror movie and my twisted mind, and I love baking the whole cake.
And you guys reading it, enjoying it and giving me live feedback, helping me improve.. this is an amazing experience. Thank you for it. I'd like to say that I won't cheat you, and I'll try to explain everything puzzling before the story is over.
We've gone a bit past its half. There's still a lot to come. It's already at almost 16,000 words..
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Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 9:42 pm on Oct. 12, 2006 | Link to this post
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Marion
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You're welcome, and we want more. *pokes*
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Total Posts: 624 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 10:15 pm on Oct. 12, 2006 | Link to this post
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Krss
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I'm writing as we speak.
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Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 10:24 pm on Oct. 12, 2006 | Link to this post
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Almirena
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Gijs's reaction iis written very believably, and Santi's own acknowledgement of why he enlightened Gijs is a nice touch.
But... you know... is there anyone sexually NORMAL in that house? (I suspect the maid is in love with her duster, and Walker is wooing the front door knob.)
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I'm glad you're getting a kick out of writing this, Krss - we're certainly getting a kick out of reading it.
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Half-light, purblind streams where moonlight washes over trees / Lustred with a glow, as if from pearls upon the throat
Where the night's kiss lights upon her; rose's rhapsodies, / Warm as oils, imbue this bliss-fed hour with trembling note
"Where-? And who-?" Her breath's unspoken soul is light's perdue
That, hidden, seeks the unseen with a sigh… "Ah, L'inconnu!"
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Total Posts: 1033 | Joined Sep. 2006 | Posted on: 11:24 pm on Oct. 12, 2006 | Link to this post
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Fear the banana! That or get me icecream. =]
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I think I may know who the killer is. Not quite sure yet though.
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"Rectitude carried to excess harden into stiffness; benevolence indulged beyond measure sinks into weakness."
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Total Posts: 523 | Joined Sep. 2006 | Posted on: 12:57 am on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
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Krss
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When you think you're sure, PM the name to me and I'll give you credit at the end if you're right.
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Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 12:58 am on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
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Marion
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Ohh, now this is interesting. Nobody died till he said somebody will die. Bwahaha.
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Total Posts: 624 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 1:56 am on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
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Krss
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Hehe.
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Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 1:57 am on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
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Almirena
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Grippingly written! Heart-palpitatingly suspenseful!
... And the two words Marion couldn't hear over her screams were... "One down"...? *wicked grin*
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Half-light, purblind streams where moonlight washes over trees / Lustred with a glow, as if from pearls upon the throat
Where the night's kiss lights upon her; rose's rhapsodies, / Warm as oils, imbue this bliss-fed hour with trembling note
"Where-? And who-?" Her breath's unspoken soul is light's perdue
That, hidden, seeks the unseen with a sigh… "Ah, L'inconnu!"
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Total Posts: 1033 | Joined Sep. 2006 | Posted on: 2:12 am on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
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Krss
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Thank you very much.
And  probably!
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Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 2:13 am on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
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Krss
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Gijs is confused.
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Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 4:45 am on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
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Tsolaelia
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Quote: from Krss on 2:45 pm on Oct. 13, 2006
Gijs is confused.
Why do I foresee a gabnic/Santi/Gijs/snake foursome?
And of course, I'd be willing to play any parts you need me to for the trailer; perhaps Almirena could help with extra roles, too. Krss should play Krss, though!
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Total Posts: 460 | Joined Sep. 2006 | Posted on: 5:28 am on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
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Gijs
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No! Not Nico! 
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Total Posts: 949 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 6:06 am on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
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Krss
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Quote: from Gijs on 1:06 am on Oct. 13, 2006
No! Not Nico!
I'm afraid so.. but I think you'd better start worrying about Gijs.
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Total Posts: 2307 | Joined Aug. 2006 | Posted on: 4:49 pm on Oct. 13, 2006 | Link to this post
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Gijs
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Who will survive and what will be left of them.
(from what was that? the thing?)
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